1. Shin feels big drops of sweat rolling down the side of her face as her heart starts thumping harder in her chest. She stares in horror as the clock strikes 0123 AM and the sound of a door creaking open reaches her ears.
2. Thankfully, the rest of the afternoon becomes a blurry gap in his memory.
3. Damien pulls the dagger out desperately, only to regret it as the wound starts to bleed profusely with no signs of stopping.
4. Almost immediately, Yeni is on the verge of a nervous breakdown.
5. Ben looks down to find crimson blood dripping from his very own hands.
6. Jun tilts her head forward as a single tear escapes her eye.
7. His eyelids are open, yet darkness is all he sees.
8. His face crease in a pensive frown as he leans over and listlessly watches life pass by in front of his eyes, heedless of his plight.
9. The details of the afternoon rushes once again through his emotionally numb mind.
10. “You are such a loser. Face it, you are a loser now.” These words ring repeatedly in his head as he tosses and turns.
11. No one knows what will happen in the next split second, however, ignorance is bliss.
12. It is day and to Daryl, another day of humiliation and loneliness.
Your openers are pretty well-written. They show variety and thought – well done!
Comment by theredpants — May 19, 2010 @ 10:56 AM